Introduction

Critique

Conclusions

References

Conclusions

As a webtext, Viz is constantly changing. I reviewed this site between March 20 and March 30 and then again between May 2 and May 4, 2008.  It could be that I happened to review Viz at a slower period when only a few assignments asking for visual rhetoric production were present. As with all dynamic webtexts, this could definitely change in the near future—and I hope it does.  And, indeed, there seemed to be an increasing number of assignments asking for visual design the longer I reviewed the site.  Ideally, it would be wonderful to see assignments that called for both complex visual design and analysis—students could analyze visual artifacts even while they were enacting these same principles within their own design of the analysis project.  In this way, analysis could become part of the design and design could inform the analysis.

Fortunately, by the time I ended my review of Viz, there were at least four assignments that asked students to construct some type of visual rhetoric for an audience other than the instructor. The first assignment asked students to construct a proposal argument solving some problem and then, from this proposal argument, to design a website that in some way encourages the audience to take action to solve the problem. The assignment encouraged students to pick an audience that could best implement the solution or bring about change. The second assignment also asked students to create a proposal, but this time they could do this by creating a website, PowerPoint, or movie.  Sadly, neither assignment has the depth of detail in discussing how to teach rhetorically effective design that the other assignments do in analyzing visual artifacts.

The third assignment asked students to design a PowerPoint presentation. The presentation had to incorporate visual elements, include 10 slides, be done collaboratively, and last 10 minutes. Other than that, the assignment seemed rather vague on what the presentations would actually be about. Also, the objectives of the assignment seemed more focused on teaching students the mechanics of PowerPoint software than on teaching them how to use visuals in rhetorically effective ways or on helping them become more rhetorically savvy in their delivery. Again, this seems like a missed pedagogical opportunity. Why couldn't the assignment achieve all three goals simultaneously (as well as teaching students how to construct arguments in multiple ways)?


Visual Resistance Blog Entry on Viz

The fourth assignment was the most creative and demanding in terms of the students' production of visual rhetoric. It asked students to develop a storyboard for a film.  Students were first required to write a story statement.  Then students were asked to compose a brief statement of what their film is about, a story outline, a treatment, a script, and a manifesto in which they articulate and then defend the creative and rhetorical choices they have made in their film. While the assignment did not ask students to actually shoot a film, this is understandable given the technological sophistication and time requirements needed to properly shoot and edit a film—especially in a first-year writing course where rhetorical choices need to be emphasized over technological skills. But even without shooting a film, students still needed to negotiate the creative and rhetorical choices required in order to make the film, giving students valuable rhetorical experience within the film medium. Also, this assignment was structured enough that if teachers have access to filming and editing technology that is fairly easy for students to learn, teachers could easily adapt this assignment so that students could actually shoot a short film.

Overall, including these four assignments, Viz has incredible depth in the way that it discusses and analyzes the visual. The site would be even richer if it included that visual rhetorical depth in more assignments that invited students to actively engage in creating their own visual rhetoric.